User talk:ScorpionTail

Welcome
Hi, welcome to ! Thanks for your edit to the User blog:Gcheung28/Exclusive: Koike, Maruyama Speak page.

Please leave a message on my talk page if I can help with anything! Sxerks (talk) 03:01, August 20, 2013 (UTC)

Collaborative Writing Project
I'm sorry, it does look like yours based on the history but I see that it could also be the last user's. Don't worry, either way you're not blocked from contributing.

Thanks for your interest!

Kate 03:10, September 4, 2013 (UTC)

Re:Character Bios
I'm sorry, the only contributions you can make are to the story, and in a linear fashion. Character bios were written by the Masters and not meant to be edited.

Thanks, Kate 00:06, September 5, 2013 (UTC)

Re:Contribute
Yeah, sure. I just posted a new paragraph. Pikapwn 02:23, September 5, 2013 (UTC)

Work Together
I got your message. And I think we can work together. I was mainly thinking of the interaction between the Anarchist and the Girl. But don't think about a romantic pairing between a human and vampire/werewolf, that's way too cliché for my tastes (this isn't Twilight).--Zeromaro (talk) 02:40, September 5, 2013 (UTC)

Me again, I was thinking of adding something about how a special protein in werewolves cause their transformations. It's something that vampires find irresistible which is why the CEO made the call to have werewolves hunted down and use it in Red Bat.--Zeromaro (talk) 03:07, September 5, 2013 (UTC)

That's exactly what I was going to do, which is why their brains keep getting scooped out, as the protein is located their, in that particular part of the brain. --ScorpionTail (talk) 03:09, September 5, 2013 (UTC)

i really like this idea that Werewolf blood is a Ingredient to the Red bat drink and that its addictive to vampires. if only the story could revolve around the Red bat drink and the Company that makes the drink and the characters that the master of animanga specified rather then people typing random things about a civil war in the United states and Nuclear wars. Promethius20 (talk) 18:01, September 8, 2013 (UTC)

That's the direction that I intended on going in. In fact, the storyline would've been much darker and more mature if I had managed to place emphasis on that idea without the focus changing. --ScorpionTail (talk) 18:14, September 8, 2013 (UTC)

Re:Idea Exchange
Sure, but I've got to go now. I did have an idea of Gabriel confusing Rose for the wolf murder. We can exchange more ideas whenever I can get online again.--Pikapwn (talk) 02:41, September 5, 2013 (UTC)Pikapwn

Hello. So I was thinking of two possibilities. This new Efriend character could be the Rival, since earlier he said he wanted to work with Gabriel to shut down Red Bat and the Vanarchists. OR Efriend could be an agent for the Vanarchists tricking Gabriel, and the Rival rushes in to stop him. Either way, the next paragraph would start out with Efriend telling Gabriel about the Civil War that's about to break out between the vampires and humans. What do you think? --Pikapwn (talk) 01:54, September 6, 2013 (UTC)

Rose
Yes but she could've gotten kidnapped in a short period of time, I just wrote what i felt Caring16:) (talk) 00:06, September 6, 2013 (UTC)

Re: Shakespeare
Hey there,

I answered this in the talk page but you cannot use any other characters other than original creations or the ones that the Masters created for the story. I hope this answers your question.

Kate 16:17, September 6, 2013 (UTC)

RE:
Oh, thanks for the information.

Want me to recorrect the "Rival" part then?

Mikey Klebbitz (talk) 19:25, September 6, 2013 (UTC)

OK, Scorpion, I've re-edited it.

Tell me what you think.

Mikey Klebbitz (talk) 19:51, September 6, 2013 (UTC)

Nayun was a name I came up with for the guy Gabriel gave his gun to.

I gave him a Israeli name, because in the end, after becoming friends with Gabriel and the rest of the crew, and seeing the death of his recently met friends, he commits suicide to meet with Zion.

Is that crazy enough or not?

Mikey Klebbitz (talk) 20:03, September 6, 2013 (UTC)

Well, I just came here to contribute with my share to the story.

The other users will use my bit of text and interpret it as they want, and write the rest of the tale, so they can imagine what's gonna happen to Nayun.

Besides, Nayun is just as good a name as any other.

Mikey Klebbitz (talk) 20:19, September 6, 2013 (UTC)

Thank you.

From time to time, I might come here to check on how the tale is developing.

Perhaps we could talk?

Mikey Klebbitz (talk) 20:24, September 6, 2013 (UTC)

Alright.

Later on, friend. :)

Mikey Klebbitz (talk) 20:31, September 6, 2013 (UTC)

My Error
Sorry about the plot hole I accidentally wrote. I've been trying to keep track of the shifting back and forth between scenes and thought I was doing ok. Thanks for the correction.Ezvil (talk) 17:31, September 8, 2013 (UTC)Ezvil

No problem. --ScorpionTail (talk) 01:53, September 8, 2013 (UTC)

Re: Constructive Criticism
Hi, ScorpionTail.

I'm not a writer, just a fan of manga/anime, but I agree with what you wrote on the project talk, about writers working together better, rather than building a story on their own. You could, for instance, use a chatroom to discuss any major plot changes. As I understand, this is a first try writing a story this way, so problems are to be expected. Stefan (Shikai - &#34;Rust &#38; Shatter&#34;) (talk) 02:15, September 8, 2013 (UTC)

Escape from the building
Do only Rose and Gabriel need to make the helipad? I was attempting to write the next paragraph about the team escaping to the helipad, and I was thinking of tying in the fact Sander and Niflheim are both injured and either one or the other sacrificing them-self to ensure the other makes it on time. However, if they were fighting outside the building, then this would not make much sense for them. Ezvil (talk) 17:38, September 8, 2013 (UTC)

Edit: Nvm some1's already continued it.

Hi Scorpion Tail, Im new to this wikia, but a fan of Wikia in general. I have a folder in my bookmarks filled with them lol. But anyways I was browsing one and the Collab writing popped up in the corner. I read the Red Bat (Most of it) and just wanted to know if I could jump in or do i need to wait for another collab? --Hitman Renaissance (talk) 20:00, September 8, 2013 (UTC)Hitman Renaissance

We'll see. --ScorpionTail (talk) 20:10, September 8, 2013 (UTC)

(User:Sunami King)My whole post i just typed deleted so let me make this quick. I have no idea how to post exactly on here xD 2). I was going to delete the entry when i woke up today morning, but i woke up alte for school. Then at school I was going to delete it but my computer screen cracked and the aldy for 8th graders' computers was sick. SO came home from my tennis tournament at7 pm and they had a third new plotline xD! Sorry about that and Im posting this on you're talk and mine so if you'll tell me how to reply to talk messages that would be nice.

Oh and sure lets be friends Sunami King (talk) 23:40, September 10, 2013 (UTC)

My last addition
I was hesistant in my last post (making the vision of Julius a hallucination) so I wanted to check and see if you thought what I did was ok as far as plot goes. Im totally open to editing it or deleting it if there needs to be some changes. --Ezvil (talk) 00:30, September 11, 2013 (UTC)

The vision of Julius should definitely be an illusion. Make sure he lives. He is supposed to be the comic relief character. --ScorpionTail (talk) 00:36, September 11, 2013 (UTC)

Gotcha that's what I was thinking and why I did it. U can't kill off comic relief --Ezvil (talk) 00:43, September 11, 2013 (UTC)

Yeah, that's usually a steadfast rule. By the way, will the staff end the story for us if we can't do it ourselves? --ScorpionTail (talk) 00:52, September 11, 2013 (UTC)

Im not sure, I'd hope so, Im thinking we really should end things hear (after deciding whether or not Sander lives. Then I think we officially end things). The ending has been shaky (a few posts in particular) but I think it's shaped out decent. and I think it helped flesh out a few of the characters a little (like I tried to make Julius more comedic). --Ezvil (talk) 02:44, September 11, 2013 (UTC)

Don't worry. That last post is history. It had too many sentences in it and it broke the rules, so I got rid of it. --ScorpionTail (talk) 02:47, September 11, 2013 (UTC)

Oh ok good. But yeh agreed we should try and convince everyone to try and wrap things up? --Ezvil (talk) 02:49, September 11, 2013 (UTC)

Definitely. We now have an opportunity to end the story, and we shall take that opportunity. --ScorpionTail (talk) 02:51, September 11, 2013 (UTC)

My 2 entries have worked out for the overall story! woot Sunami King (talk) 11:19, September 11, 2013 (UTC)User:Sunami King

Yep nicely done Sunami. Ur last two posts were a great improvement. Also, it looks like we have a nice, clear-cut ending to the story now, which is fantastic.--Ezvil (talk) 14:55, September 11, 2013 (UTC)

Good job, Sunami King. --ScorpionTail (talk) 15:33, September 11, 2013 (UTC)