User talk:Sunami King

Bad Plot Twist
This plot twist is only convoluting the story. Get rid of it. --ScorpionTail (talk) 00:48, September 10, 2013 (UTC)

SO what do you want me to change.... i thought introducing a new group would make things more interesting.... Every good manga has at least 2 good p[lots\

Sunami King (talk) 01:06, September 10, 2013 (UTC)Sunami king

True, but we don't have time to add any new groups. Try making it more about how Gabriel's mother sent him a letter and that Sander has found it near Lorenzio. Besides, the Vanarchists were the second bad group, but they're gone now. --ScorpionTail (talk) 01:26, September 10, 2013 (UTC)

Oh, and sorry about earlier. --ScorpionTail (talk) 01:27, September 10, 2013 (UTC)

ok... found the wikia at 5 pm

Friends? --ScorpionTail (User:Sunami King)My whole post i just typed deleted so let me make this quick. I have no idea how to post exactly on here xD 2). I was going to delete the entry when i woke up today morning, but i woke up alte for school. Then at school I was going to delete it but my computer screen cracked and the aldy for 8th graders' computers was sick. SO came home from my tennis tournament at7 pm and they had a third new plotline xD! Sorry about that and Im posting this on you're talk and mine so if you'll tell me how to reply to talk messages that would be nice.

Your latest plot makes no sense. Get rid of it. --ScorpionTail (talk) 02:31, September 11, 2013 (UTC)

We just stated Arborius was dead, no way around it. Your last post completely ignores that. I understand your are new but please remember to consider when writing ur parts all the contributions others have put in before you post something new. We already have a lot of plot twists, so in the future, try and continue onto the post written by the people before them rather than adding on lots of plot twists. Also, Julius is the comic relief character, so him actually being a villain does not fit into the plot. --Ezvil (talk) 02:38, September 11, 2013 (UTC)

Welcome
Hi, welcome to ! Thanks for your edit to the Collaborative Writing Project: Red Bat page.

Please leave a message on my talk page if I can help with anything! Sxerks (talk) 01:57, September 10, 2013 (UTC)

Animanga Project
Please do not make any references to drugs, any other infraction will result in a temporary ban.

Kate 17:16, September 11, 2013 (UTC)

Nice Post
You really outdid yourself with this last one. --ScorpionTail (talk) 20:22, September 11, 2013 (UTC)

Are you being serious or joking? Cus it got deleted. I was hoping to end the series right there.... Oh well. Since I don;t know if you see this I'm posting this on my talk and your talk pages -- User:Sunami King

Hey there,

The reason why it was deleted was because it exceeded the 6 sentence maximum rule, and we brought in a different user to close out the story. Hope this helps, the next one will start in 2 days.

Kate 23:36, September 11, 2013 (UTC)

I was being serious, actually. Sorry it got deleted. --ScorpionTail (talk) 01:50, September 12, 2013 (UTC)

Yeh I too was being serious, it was a very nice addition and u showed some good improvement. Also i posted a longer reply on my talk page--Ezvil (talk) 02:48, September 12, 2013 (UTC)

Gee thanks guys! That makes me feel better. My mom caught me editing this and going through the wikia at 12 am last night and I'm really screwed over right now. I definitely will be working on T0A as much as I can and I will definitely try to make it crisp and clean. Posting this on my talk, you're talk (ezvil, and scorpion) and I'll definitely keep in touch. I can't access wikia from school, but could you email the the thing when it releases at 1pm EST for me. Ill email you guys back with what I have. I think we need more character develpoment in this one. And since I'll be here form the start. We can definitely work together. Scorpion and Ez you both seem to have some degree of authority in this wiki so I will definitely be seeking your help! When I amde my first post I read abotu who lerenzio was and who the other few guys were VERY briefly. I finished the first segment then jsut wrote that. Ill be up to date on this so it'll be much easier. Sunami King (talk) 20:48, September 12, 2013 (UTC)Sunami King User:Sunami King

Chat
I responded to your message. --ScorpionTail (talk) 21:05, September 12, 2013 (UTC)

Ask User:Scorpion Tail About what we discussed for the coming story - TOA: The search for Yin-Yang. User:Stefan (Shikai - "Rust & Shatter") is also part of this new project. Posted on all four of our talk apges to give y'all a heads up. -- User:Sunami King

Please Sign
Hi Sunami King. Please sign your recent contribution to the collaborative writing project or else it will be deleted. Thanks,

Matt

Edit the post
I can barely read what you've typed. Please go back and edit it so that it's easier to understand. --ScorpionTail (talk) 21:23, September 13, 2013 (UTC)

Who is say the witch's name? And you went over six sentences, by the way. --ScorpionTail (talk) 21:52, September 13, 2013 (UTC)

I made Khopesh an anti-hero, so Julia's comment is justified to a degree. --ScorpionTail (talk) 22:44, September 13, 2013 (UTC)

That's because Zero Chemistry screwed it up. Someone will have to delete his post. --ScorpionTail (talk) 22:56, September 13, 2013 (UTC)

You made the witch's name Julia, right? --ScorpionTail (talk) 00:11, September 14, 2013 (UTC)

You there? --ScorpionTail (talk) 00:21, September 14, 2013 (UTC)

Fire Elemental
How was it screwed up? Hope is the Elemental Hero of Fire. Sunami King, what's going on? --ScorpionTail (talk) 22:10, September 18, 2013 (UTC)

Basically, the dojo where everyone was training in got invaded by the Legion of Swords, and the Khopesh died trying to save everyone. Then, Hope, Erika, Mizuki, Tang Chin, and Mibu fight four of the generals of the Legion of Swords named Zweihander, Scimitar, Dao, and the already revealed Claymore. Then is was discovered sometime afterward that, in order to truly save the world, the souls of Mizuki and Erika need to be linked so that they may become the legendary woman named the "Ying-Yang".

Hopefully, you'll be able to understand the rest of it. --ScorpionTail (talk) 22:12, September 19, 2013 (UTC)