User talk:Sunami King

Bad Plot Twist
This plot twist is only convoluting the story. Get rid of it. --ScorpionTail (talk) 00:48, September 10, 2013 (UTC)

SO what do you want me to change.... i thought introducing a new group would make things more interesting.... Every good manga has at least 2 good p[lots\

Sunami King (talk) 01:06, September 10, 2013 (UTC)Sunami king

True, but we don't have time to add any new groups. Try making it more about how Gabriel's mother sent him a letter and that Sander has found it near Lorenzio. Besides, the Vanarchists were the second bad group, but they're gone now. --ScorpionTail (talk) 01:26, September 10, 2013 (UTC)

Oh, and sorry about earlier. --ScorpionTail (talk) 01:27, September 10, 2013 (UTC)

ok... found the wikia at 5 pm

Friends? --ScorpionTail (User:Sunami King)My whole post i just typed deleted so let me make this quick. I have no idea how to post exactly on here xD 2). I was going to delete the entry when i woke up today morning, but i woke up alte for school. Then at school I was going to delete it but my computer screen cracked and the aldy for 8th graders' computers was sick. SO came home from my tennis tournament at7 pm and they had a third new plotline xD! Sorry about that and Im posting this on you're talk and mine so if you'll tell me how to reply to talk messages that would be nice.

Your latest plot makes no sense. Get rid of it. --ScorpionTail (talk) 02:31, September 11, 2013 (UTC)

We just stated Arborius was dead, no way around it. Your last post completely ignores that. I understand your are new but please remember to consider when writing ur parts all the contributions others have put in before you post something new. We already have a lot of plot twists, so in the future, try and continue onto the post written by the people before them rather than adding on lots of plot twists. Also, Julius is the comic relief character, so him actually being a villain does not fit into the plot. --Ezvil (talk) 02:38, September 11, 2013 (UTC)

Welcome
Hi, welcome to ! Thanks for your edit to the Collaborative Writing Project: Red Bat page.

Please leave a message on my talk page if I can help with anything! Sxerks (talk) 01:57, September 10, 2013 (UTC)