User talk:Jottie22

Welcome
Hi, welcome to ! Thanks for your edit to the Talk:Collaborative Writing Project: Red Bat page.

Please leave a message on my talk page if I can help with anything! Sxerks (talk) 01:09, September 8, 2013 (UTC)

Help
Due to the pacing, the story has become too random. Please give me advice on how to handle the situation. --ScorpionTail (talk) 01:18, September 8, 2013 (UTC)

Please help with the story. It ticks me off that no one is helping to make it better right now, and I feel that I, being among the many people with high expectations for this story, need to remedy the situation now before the ending is ruined. --ScorpionTail (talk) 02:49, September 8, 2013 (UTC)

Comment on TAO
I agree with your opinion, however the people who are trying to at least partially direct the story are trying to get the story to make some type of sense by the end. Any suggestions you have, as long as they don't completely over haul the story thus far, since it can't be majorly edited in the past sections because of a rule, would be helpful. Ultimately, this is what happens when collaboration is not completely implemented.

Also, I think that by the 21st, the story will be able to be read without (much) difficulty. Respond to this as you like, I welcome your opinion and potential contributions and critiques. --ChaosWyvern-i (talk) 03:48, September 15, 2013 (UTC)

Besides, other writers did this with Red Bat, too. All we're doing is simply posting our ideas. This is something everyone else is doing, dude. --ScorpionTail (talk) 04:08, September 15, 2013 (UTC)

Hi Jottie
I've just been reading the comment you left on scorpiontail and I agree with you completely. It has felt like the story has completely been sent on a completely new direction. In fact, I'm scared of what will happen with the Samurai story. Of course, I could have tolerated that, as long as in the end we could have brought the story back to something that resembled the original premise, but after a recent entry that was supposed to resolve the witch being in two different places and being two different characters but in my mind utterly betrayed what she was supposed to be and the story's premise, that I've just withdrawn from the project out of disgust. If you've ever watched the nostalgia critic's review of 'the never ending story 3', this is somewhat how I felt as to what had become of this story.

And now just after reading it's progress, to paraphrase another character on youtube:

"Honestly I don't understand what the heck is going on!" (Anonymius (talk) 19:29, September 15, 2013 (UTC))

Listen, Jottie, I agree that we need to do something. I tried my best to separate Mibu, Mizuki and Erika from the other characters so that they could go back to what they needed to. That was the whole point of them arriving at that dojo. The characters would have gotten to know Mibu on a personal level while Mibu would do the same with Erika and Mizuki. Please help make things right. That's all I ask. Just don't do it too drastically. --ScorpionTail (talk) 21:29, September 15, 2013 (UTC)

Good news. We're now on our way to making this story more like how it was intended by the creator. :D --ScorpionTail (talk) 22:02, September 15, 2013 (UTC)

Yes. Already, Mibu and Erika are starting to get closer in terms of their relationship. --ScorpionTail (talk) 22:43, September 15, 2013 (UTC)