User talk:Ezvil

Welcome
Hi, welcome to ! Thanks for your edit to the Collaborative Writing Project: Red Bat page.

Please leave a message on my talk page if I can help with anything! Sxerks (talk) 16:13, September 5, 2013 (UTC)

nicely done :D Caring16:) (talk) 00:37, September 6, 2013 (UTC)

Correction
Julius, Patricia, and Bethany aren't with Gabriel, Sander and Rose, remember? They had to stay at their makeshift base. --ScorpionTail (talk) 18:37, September 7, 2013 (UTC)

Oh sorry, thank you for the correction. I've been trying to keep track of the plot winding back and forth between scenes. Ezvil (talk) 19:35, September 7, 2013 (UTC)

No problem. Also, go to my blog. I have some things I'd like to discuss with everyone. --ScorpionTail (talk) 01:49, September 8, 2013 (UTC)

The Missiles
Please save the ending of this story. I'm tired of the missiles. They're too lazily implemented to trust in any writer's hands at this point, and I worry that the ending will be ruined. --ScorpionTail (talk) 02:20, September 8, 2013 (UTC)

Alrighty gotcha, thats why I purposely side-stepped the idea. I dont like the missile idea either, but I was basically just going along with what other people had. But yes from here on out I'll leave them out. --Ezvil (talk) 03:20, September 8, 2013 (UTC)

Response to your comment
Maybe the CEO could sacrifice himself to save everyone else. --ScorpionTail (talk) 17:48, September 8, 2013 (UTC)

Yeh I think that was an excellent way to end it, quite unexpected too I think. --Ezvil (talk) 19:43, September 8, 2013 (UTC)

Also, fan-art has finally appeared. --ScorpionTail (talk) 19:44, September 8, 2013 (UTC)

Awesome, I do a little manga drawing in my spare time but I currently dont have access to my scanner so I'll have to wait to do fan-art until next time. --Ezvil (talk) 19:57, September 8, 2013 (UTC)

Are you being serious or joking? Cus it got deleted. I was hoping to end the series right there.... Oh well. Since I don;t know if you see this I'm posting this on my talk and your talk pages -- User:Sunami King

I want to know why my ending got deleted if it was so good? Also, can you give me a run down of the basics on Wikia. I'm only in eighth grade so I really have no idea xD. I found this wikia through the yugioh wikia when I was looking up rulings. I really enjoy writing and reading, so I was like meh why not. So I even skipped basketball practice at school to finish that ending. Also, does the latest post by zenomaro make sense? Wasn't Dragomir Lovinscue the CEO? User: Sunami King

Hmm I thought ur ending part in the courtroom made some sense and was a good transition to the end, im not sure why it got erased (and I was being serious). Also I mentioned it was an improvement over your other posts, I dont recall explicitly saying it was super good. I do want to apologize if I came off as harsh, but with your joining onto the project so late into the cycle made it a little difficult (not that it was any fault of yours). You have some good ideas, but soem of your phrasing needs some work, which is very understandable since you're only in the 8th grade. Also, this was my first time using the wiki too so I can't really give u much help on the rules besides the 10 or so rules listed at the start of the story.

I encourage you to hop onto the next collab coming up and give it another shot. If u start writing from the begining it will be easier and mroe likely your ideas will be included (in the end, its up to the editor's discretion on what is used in the final product). --Ezvil (talk) 02:45, September 12, 2013 (UTC)

Gee thanks guys! That makes me feel better. My mom caught me editing this and going through the wikia at 12 am last night and I'm really screwed over right now. I definitely will be working on T0A as much as I can and I will definitely try to make it crisp and clean. Posting this on my talk, you're talk (ezvil, and scorpion) and I'll definitely keep in touch. I can't access wikia from school, but could you email the the thing when it releases at 1pm EST for me. Ill email you guys back with what I have. I think we need more character develpoment in this one. And since I'll be here form the start. We can definitely work together. Scorpion and Ez you both seem to have some degree of authority in this wiki so I will definitely be seeking your help! When I amde my first post I read abotu who lerenzio was and who the other few guys were VERY briefly. I finished the first segment then jsut wrote that. Ill be up to date on this so it'll be much easier. Sunami King (talk) 20:46, September 12, 2013 (UTC)Sunami King User:Sunami King

My email is gameruler2000@gmail.com. Please delete this once you see thisUser: Sunami king

Ask User:Scorpion Tail About what we discussed for the coming story - TOA: The search for Yin-Yang. User:Stefan (Shikai - "Rust & Shatter") is also part of this new project. Posted on all four of our talk apges to give y'all a heads up. -- User:Sunami King

Alrighty I've read what we have so far for the new story. Unfortunately, im currently swamped with work so im not sure how much ill be able to contribute to this 1 but il do my best. --Ezvil (talk) 19:38, September 13, 2013 (UTC)

Come on Ez..... We need you here. Try to post like me and psoit in the evenings after school/work.

21:51, September 13, 2013 (UTC) User: Sunami King

I've got a post or 2 in there. I'm thinking il still contribute a bit, just not as frequently as I did on the last 1. --Ezvil (talk) 03:07, September 14, 2013 (UTC)

Let's Make Lemonade
I have an idea that will help us focus on the witch and maiden's relationship with the hero more. Let's focus on their relationship while the events are happening, treating the other characters as minor ones, and having the three main characters get more attention. --ScorpionTail (talk) 23:16, September 14, 2013 (UTC)

I mean, is it really that difficult to worm your way out of a literary stump in a mess like this? Don't worry, compared to Red Bat, the story is going rather well. --ScorpionTail (talk) 23:31, September 14, 2013 (UTC)