User talk:Sunami King

Bad Plot Twist
This plot twist is only convoluting the story. Get rid of it. --ScorpionTail (talk) 00:48, September 10, 2013 (UTC)

SO what do you want me to change.... i thought introducing a new group would make things more interesting.... Every good manga has at least 2 good p[lots\

Sunami King (talk) 01:06, September 10, 2013 (UTC)Sunami king

True, but we don't have time to add any new groups. Try making it more about how Gabriel's mother sent him a letter and that Sander has found it near Lorenzio. Besides, the Vanarchists were the second bad group, but they're gone now. --ScorpionTail (talk) 01:26, September 10, 2013 (UTC)

Oh, and sorry about earlier. --ScorpionTail (talk) 01:27, September 10, 2013 (UTC)

ok... found the wikia at 5 pm

Friends? --ScorpionTail (talk) 01:40, September 10, 2013 (UTC)

Welcome
Hi, welcome to ! Thanks for your edit to the Collaborative Writing Project: Red Bat page.

Please leave a message on my talk page if I can help with anything! Sxerks (talk) 01:57, September 10, 2013 (UTC)