User talk:Ezvil

Welcome
Hi, welcome to ! Thanks for your edit to the Collaborative Writing Project: Red Bat page.

Please leave a message on my talk page if I can help with anything! Sxerks (talk) 16:13, September 5, 2013 (UTC)

nicely done :D Caring16:) (talk) 00:37, September 6, 2013 (UTC)

Correction
Julius, Patricia, and Bethany aren't with Gabriel, Sander and Rose, remember? They had to stay at their makeshift base. --ScorpionTail (talk) 18:37, September 7, 2013 (UTC)

Oh sorry, thank you for the correction. I've been trying to keep track of the plot winding back and forth between scenes. Ezvil (talk) 19:35, September 7, 2013 (UTC)

No problem. Also, go to my blog. I have some things I'd like to discuss with everyone. --ScorpionTail (talk) 01:49, September 8, 2013 (UTC)

The Missiles
Please save the ending of this story. I'm tired of the missiles. They're too lazily implemented to trust in any writer's hands at this point, and I worry that the ending will be ruined. --ScorpionTail (talk) 02:20, September 8, 2013 (UTC)

Alrighty gotcha, thats why I purposely side-stepped the idea. I dont like the missile idea either, but I was basically just going along with what other people had. But yes from here on out I'll leave them out. --Ezvil (talk) 03:20, September 8, 2013 (UTC)

Response to your comment
Maybe the CEO could sacrifice himself to save everyone else. --ScorpionTail (talk) 17:48, September 8, 2013 (UTC)

Yeh I think that was an excellent way to end it, quite unexpected too I think. --Ezvil (talk) 19:43, September 8, 2013 (UTC)

Also, fan-art has finally appeared. --ScorpionTail (talk) 19:44, September 8, 2013 (UTC)

Awesome, I do a little manga drawing in my spare time but I currently dont have access to my scanner so I'll have to wait to do fan-art until next time. --Ezvil (talk) 19:57, September 8, 2013 (UTC)