User talk:Jottie22

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Hi, welcome to ! Thanks for your edit to the Talk:Collaborative Writing Project: Red Bat page.

Please leave a message on my talk page if I can help with anything! Sxerks (talk) 01:09, September 8, 2013 (UTC)

Help
Due to the pacing, the story has become too random. Please give me advice on how to handle the situation. --ScorpionTail (talk) 01:18, September 8, 2013 (UTC)

Please help with the story. It ticks me off that no one is helping to make it better right now, and I feel that I, being among the many people with high expectations for this story, need to remedy the situation now before the ending is ruined. --ScorpionTail (talk) 02:49, September 8, 2013 (UTC)

Comment on TAO
I agree with your opinion, however the people who are trying to at least partially direct the story are trying to get the story to make some type of sense by the end. Any suggestions you have, as long as they don't completely over haul the story thus far, since it can't be majorly edited in the past sections because of a rule, would be helpful. Ultimately, this is what happens when collaboration is not completely implemented.

Also, I think that by the 21st, the story will be able to be read without (much) difficulty. Respond to this as you like, I welcome your opinion and potential contributions and critiques. --ChaosWyvern-i (talk) 03:48, September 15, 2013 (UTC)

Besides, other writers did this with Red Bat, too. All we're doing is simply posting our ideas. This is something everyone else is doing, dude. --ScorpionTail (talk) 04:08, September 15, 2013 (UTC)